WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
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when and where you did something special
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who was with you
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what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Jack Wells
Hanmer Springs Walk Track
Last holidays I
went with my mummy, my brother called Luke and my daddy. We all stayed in a
house with four bedrooms. There were three downstairs and one was upstairs. We
all stayed upstairs. I was next to my mummy’s and daddy’s bed at the corner of
the bedroom near the slope of the roof. Then we went for a walk up a steep
hill. When we came to the top of the hill it was a pleasant view. I felt tired
after that because it was so steep.
Next
steps
Add some extra details with some describing
words to let us know what you saw on the walk up the hill and what you saw in
the view that was so pleasant.
