We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Jack you have included several interesting adjectives. You are correctly placing fullstops and capital letters correctly. Great writing.
To continue with your new confidence to write interesting recounts.